_____________________________________________________________________ CAUSE AND EFFECT _____________________________________________________________________ Since childhood we have been discovering the causes and effects of our actions. At a very young age we discovered that hot things burned us, that crying brought our parents, and that unacceptable behavior brought punishment. As a mode of expository writing, cause and effect analyzes the result caused by a combination of forces, or the force which causes various results. In plainer language, a cause and effect essay examines the result of several causes, the cause for several results, or a single cause and its effect. The writer of such a paper will often find it necessary, due to the analytical nature of cause and effect, to rely on other modes of expository writing. For example, certain causes or effects need to be described, defined, compared or contrasted before they can be analyzed. PRINCIPLES An author must keep in mind three principles of cause and effect before he or she begins to write. Much of the real work in writing a cause and effect essay comes before writing, in the pre-writing stage. These principles will demonstrate the importance of planning the cause and effect paper. First, the most damaging error to any cause and effect essay is the creation of a "false cause." This term comes from the Latin formal logical fallacy entitled "post hoc ergo propter hoc," which can be translated to "after this therefore because of this." In other words, just because one event occurs in time before another event does not mean that the first event caused the second. Examples of this fallacy abound. In fact, most of our superstitions come from this sort of reasoning. According to superstition, black cats and broken mirrors bring bad luck, and stepping on a crack will "break your mother's back." When planning your cause and effect essay be sure that you don't commit this fallacy. Second, authors often commit an error related to the "post hoc..." fallacy. That is, often causes are cited which are totally irrelevant to the effect merely because they happen at the same time. Coincidence often is the cause of such an error. For instance, if you get the measles one day after you visit a friend who has them, it might seem that you got the measles from your friend. However, the visit was not the cause; measles have a fourteen day incubation period. Third, all authors of cause and effect essays must distinguish between remote and immediate causes and effects. In a cause and effect essay of 500 words it is probably best to deal with immediate causes and effects due to the length of the paper. If the purpose of a paper were to discover why Gerald Ford pardoned Richard Nixon and the author cited the cause "because he was born" he would be citing a remote cause. In this case his birth is an accepted fact which has little to do with the paper's purpose. The same error would be committed if this cause were listed: "because Nixon was involved in Watergate." Better causes could be 1) political pressure, 2) governmental need, or 3) citizen outcry. CONVENTIONS 1. If several causes are mentioned early in the paper but you choose to cover them in depth later, be sure to keep them in the same order so you avoid confusing the reader. 2. Be sure to avoid predicting contradictory effects. No one will believe that you get all A's on the tests but an F in the course because the instructor disliked your last name. 3. Closely related to the convention above is another one of the pitfalls of the cause and effect essay--rationalization. In determining causes and effects don't substitute what you wish were the case for the facts. For example, don't blame your test grade on the fact that the class meets at 12:30. Cause and effect searches for the truth. 4. Avoid confusing cause for effect. Dissect your topic enough that you can be sure of the causes and effects. For instance, you must decide if blue jeans are the cause or the effect of our liberated society, and you must then make your reasoning clear to your reader. 5. If you have found the cause but not the effect of your topic, you might ask yourself "so what?" On the other hand, if you've found the result but not cause, you might ask yourself "Why?" STRATEGIES 1. Predict the unforeseen results of a present day cause. 2. Use cause and effect to discover and explain your beliefs in or against an idea. 3. Try taking a fresh look at history. Select an incident from the past and persuade the reader to consider the new view. 4. Give some thought to comparing or contrasting several causes and/or effects. If you keep the paper well-organized, this method can be quite interesting. 5. Develop a new view on an accepted fact (or cliche). You might come up with a thesis such as "It's not the size of the dog in the fight, but the size of fight in the dog." __________________ This handout adapted and revised by the Washburn University Writing Center from one originally prepared by the Purdue University Writing Lab, W. Lafayette, IN. [org-cause.wm]